the elemlttel forces

[Saidin]

Is it Lumie's brother ?

[Terial]

Another location where this story is...
easy to find, just search google for "becointed"

all of my fanfics - Miscellaneous - http://www.woodrecords.com/myfanfics - bottom of page (with email addy)

[r3probate]

+ interneting to combat the negs

[Dethfang]

I really tried to read the whole thing... I couldn't finish

[Tyen]

Just watch it, lol.

[spronk]

sounds like the next jerry bruckheim movie to me

[CabbitCabbit]

[Masakari]

Originally Posted by caekpie

ok this is second story from me

the forces light dark wind mars fire have gone evil the forces have been fighting for 7654 years..... BUT NOW A HERO HAS COME TO KILL THE MIGHTY FORCES!
BUT... he needs to get some stuff BEFOR HE IS GOOD FOR BATTLE and so it begins oh ya the heros name is belot


belot is walking a little when he gos into the battle shop ( belot has 1000 gold!) and gets a sword ( it cost 50 gold) and then he gos into the armor shop over here and look over and you see someone he graps you and says look kid i will give this to you this shild it will do you good and belot says thx and says will you become my ally? and it says well i guess i can... and his name is berock and you get out of there and go with berock to the monster shop and get a monster for berock and belot ( totel it cost 300 gold!) belot monster was named fox and berock monster name was zock and there monsters wer kept in a magic ball berock and belot wantd to go to the magic shop so thats where went belot and berock and got the (for the monsters) and got the fire 1 spell and cure 1 and fire 5 ( it all cost 500 gold!) and weant to the defence magic shop and got armor 9 and flame cure 4 (it all cost 250 it was all of his gold!) to becointed and next time he will go out in battle!

hi! last time on elemlttel forces wait a sec why am i doing this for i want to cut to the story
belot and berock went to the of the town and into the wild there monsters wantid to fight and about 10 mintues after belot and berock left the town a wolf came along belot took out his sword tryd to kiil it but missted but 3 times later he killd it ( he got 10 gold) and but in the battle belot got hurt his left leg was bleeding bad but now he put on his armor and went acosss a little path and we saw a lake and a little hut belot and berock went in it and a persom about 5.0 feat tall and he said the ride to the other side of the lake was 3 gold per person and ok belot said and so since there (rem it is 3 gold per person not monster)and got a farry ride to the other side and a cave was ahead of them to be cuetinnoud next time there will meet up with mars force

I APPROVE OF THIS POST

[Ibliss]

Cliffhangers suck. Tell us about the Mars Force.

[dioblaire]

i feel like i must flush my brain with bleach now...

[woot!]

Originally Posted by spronk

sounds like the next jerry bruckheim movie to me

damn, it's missing a couple explosions , but other than that, what you said is actually true

[OhSeven]

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[Zennin]

why hasn't this garbage been rickshawed yet?

[Joshthegreat2005]

Lol. I almost laughed my pepsi up through my nose reading this. So awesome. Shit.. I'm going to 4 chan.

[Joshthegreat2005]

Hey, wait a second. You said belot had 1000 gold. But he spent 1100 (50+300+500+250). Where the fuck did he get the other 100 gold? That fucker stole it didn't he?